托福写作中需要避免的

托福写作中需要避免的 垃圾词汇 1:helphelp 典型例句:helpI"ll help you . 替代语 accomodate E.g:help I"ll endeavour to accomodate you. 垃圾词汇 2:help helpful 典型例句:helpSth is helpful (to sb) 替代语 conducive E.g Sth is conducive to sb 鉴于考研作文多关于道德和品格塑造,再给出两个有用的短语:help time-honored 时代赋予的 do credit to our forbears 继承先辈的优秀传统 垃圾词汇 3:helpshow 典型例句:helpas it shows in the picture 替代语 betray 垃圾词汇 4:helpthink 典型例句:helpi think 替代语 deem 垃圾词汇 5:helpugly 典型例句:helpxxx is ugly 替代语 hideous 垃圾词汇 6:helpby the way 典型例句:helpby the way,.... 替代语 incidentally,.... 垃圾词汇 7:help much 典型例句:help there has been a much increase in the world population 替代语:helpthere has been a drastic increase in the ----垃圾词汇 8:help about 典型例句:helpit is about 250 times of that 替代语 it is approximately --垃圾词汇 9:help buy 替代语 purchase 实例讲解托福写作中需要注意的 3 个基本原则 托福的写作过程中，一般都会采用议论文的写作方式，总分和总分总也 都是考生所通常所遵循的原则。也就是，主题段落提供了论证观点的理由， 是整个文章的主体，占分最大。 一篇满分作文必须论据充分。以下内容为例： 1.Write a topic sentence for each paragraph you plan to write. Each topic sentence should relate to your thesis statement and introduce what the paragraph will be about. If you find that the topics you want to discuss do not support the thesis statement you have written, revise your thesis statement or reconsider your topic sentences. 而在每个轮段中，都必须要有明确的主题句，通过主题句展开每段内容 的论述;以下内容为例： 2.Write ideas that support your topic sentences. The topic sentence for each paragraph tells the reader what the paragraph will be about. The ideas stated in the rest of the paragraph should all relate to the topic sentence. 在托福作文的要求中，最基本的一点就是全文围绕中心句展开，新托福 满分作文(5 分)也要求“is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details”，同样必须通 过主体段落发展来实现。一般来说，一篇议论文必须包含至少两个主体段。 每 个 主 体 段 都 必 须 有 明 确 的 主 题 句 “ topic sentence” 和 若 干 支 持 句 “supporting sentences”。他们共同组成文章的理由段，对全文的论点提供 理由支持。