托福写作中避免5个不一致

托福写作中避免 5 个不一致 1、主谓不一致 例. When one have money, he can do what he want to. (When When one have money, he can do what he want to. (one When one have money, he can do what he want to. (have When one have money, he can do what he want to. (money, When one have money, he can do what he want to. (he When one have money, he can do what he want to. (can When one have money, he can do what he want to. (do When one have money, he can do what he want to. (what When one have money, he can do what he want to. (he When one have money, he can do what he want to. (want When one have money, he can do what he want to. (to. When one have money, he can do what he want to. (( 人一旦有了钱， 他就能想干什么就干什么。) 剖析：one 是单数第三人称，因而本句的 have 应改为 has;同理，want 应改为 wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。 改为：Once When one have money, he can do what he want to. (one When one have money, he can do what he want to. (has When one have money, he can do what he want to. (money, When one have money, he can do what he want to. (he When one have money, he can do what he want to. (can When one have money, he can do what he want to. (do When one have money, he can do what he want to. (what When one have money, he can do what he want to. (he When one have money, he can do what he want to. (wants When one have money, he can do what he want to. ((to When one have money, he can do what he want to. (do). 2、词性不一致 “词性不一致”常表现为：介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。 例. When one have money, he can do what he want to. (None When one have money, he can do what he want to. (can When one have money, he can do what he want to. (negative When one have money, he can do what he want to. (the When one have money, he can do what he want to. (importance When one have money, he can do what he want to. (of When one have money, he can do what he want to. (money。 剖析：negative When one have money, he can do what he want to. (系形容词，误作动词。 改为：None When one have money, he can do what he want to. (can When one have money, he can do what he want to. (deny When one have money, he can do what he want to. (the When one have money, he can do what he want to. (importance When one have money, he can do what he want to. (of When one have money, he can do what he want to. (money。 3、句子前后不一致 托福写作中的句子前后不一致是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上 不畅通，这也是考生常犯的毛病。 例. When one have money, he can do what he want to. (The When one have money, he can do what he want to. (fresh When one have money, he can do what he want to. (water, When one have money, he can do what he want to. (it When one have money, he can do what he want to. (is When one have money, he can do what he want to. (the When one have money, he can do what he want to. (most When one have money, he can do what he want to. (important When one have money, he can do what he want to. (things When one have money, he can do what he want to. (of When one have money, he can do what he want to. (the When one have money, he can do what he want to. (earth。 剖析：The When one have money, he can do what he want to. (fresh When one have money, he can do what he want to. (water When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( 与逗号后的 it When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( 不连贯。It When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( 与 things When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( 在数方面不 一致。 改为：Fresh When one have money, he can do what he want to. (water When one have money, he can do what he want to. (is When one have money, he can do what he want to. (the When one have money, he can do what he want to. (most When one have money, he can do what he want to. (important When one have money, he can do what he want to. (thing When one have money, he can do what he want to. (in When one have money, he can do what he want to. (the When one have money, he can do what he want to. (world。 4、指代对象不一致 这里的指代对象不一致主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或 者先后所用的代词不一致。把这一项单独提出来是因为大家实在很青睐这一 部分： Mary When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( was When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( friendly When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( to When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( my When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( sister When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( because When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( she When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( wanted When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( her When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( to When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( be When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( her bridesmaid. When one have money, he can do what he want to. ((玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。) 读完上面这一句话，读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当 伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确，意思就一目了 然了。这个句子可改为： Mary When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( was When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( friendly When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( to When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( my When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( sister When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( because When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( she When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( wanted When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( my When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( sister When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( to When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( be her When one have money, he can do what he want to. (bridesmaid. 例. When one have money, he can do what he want to. (And When one have money, he can do what he want to. (we When one have money, he can do what he want to. (can When one have money, he can do what he want to. (also When one have money, he can do what he want to. (know When one have money, he can do what he want to. (the When one have money, he can do what he want to. (society When one have money, he can do what he want to. (by When one have money, he can do what he want to. (serving When one have money, he can do what he want to. (it When one have money, he can do what he want to. (yourself. 剖析：句中人称代词 we When one have money, he can do what he want to. (和反身代词 yourself 指代不一致。 改为：We When one have money, he can do what he want to. (can When one have money, he can do what he want to. (also When one have money, he can do what he want to. (know When one have money, he can do what he want to. (society When one have money, he can do what he want to. (by When one have money, he can do what he want to. (serving When one have money, he can do what he want to. (it When one have money, he can do what he want to. (ourselves. 5、修饰语位置不一致 大家对这一点也常常搞混，英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不 同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化。对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足 够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解。 例. When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( I When one have money, he can do what he want to. (believe When one have money, he can do what he want to. (I When one have money, he can do what he want to. (can When one have money, he can do what he want to. (do When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( it When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( well When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( and When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( I When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( will When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( better When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( know When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( the When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( world When one have money, he can do what he want to. ( outside the When one have money, he can do what he want to. (campus. 剖析：better 位置不当，应置于句末。 如何建立文章主题思想?分论点需层层递进 在托福的写作中，一般都是以总分或者总分总结构来搭建整体脉络。所 以，无论对于哪篇文章来说，明确的主题思想和立意、清晰的段落结构对于 作文的成功展开都是非常重要的。下面小编就来和大家分享一下如何为作文 建立主题思想和段落结构。 首先，能有内容的展开，才是立意的方向。在托福作文考试时，考生有 时为了能博取高分，会使用些标新立异的主题。目的在于告诉考官，自己是 一个不走“寻常路”，是一个高分学员。但是小编想提醒大家，在作文的考试 中展示自己的逻辑严密和语言能力才是最重要的。如果确立了一个华丽的主 题之后，才发现对于主题内容很难展开，写了没几句话就觉得无从入手，那 小编建议大家不如回归到平实的立意，轻松展开段落的结构。 其次，每段的分论点，需要层层递进关系。在文章的主题立意决定后， 就需要确定每段内容的分论点。而这些分论点也是对于主题论证的最重要部 分，一般在论证时，考生都会选用 2-3 个论点。小编想要提醒大家，每段内 容的分论点不能相互独立，必须有着其相互的关联性。 最后，在思维方向，围绕内容展开。在每段论证的展开时候，考生一般 会用举例去展开论证。因为，举例论证法不但可以强有力的为论点加以论证， 而且也可以让文章内容更加充实，使整篇文章内容不会显得过于枯燥干涩， 也让考生不必为字数问题再过于担忧。但是，许多同学在考前会准备些例子， 在文章进行进行套用，小编也需要提醒大家，举例论证最为关键的还是围绕 着内容展开，所以在选取例证时要有其针对性和目的性，不能随意加以套用。