全国高考英语满分优秀作文范文

题目： 你给英国朋友 Chris 写一封信，内容包括： 1.你们原计划 7 月份一同去云南旅游; 2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往; 3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到 8 月份。 注意： 1.词数不少于 50. 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Chris, ____________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Joe 考点：考察提纲类作文 写作指导： 本文属于应用文中的书信，要求写信给英国朋友 Chris 说明取消计划的 原因并建议推测旅行至 8 月份。以第一人称为主。 要点： 1.你们原计划 7 月份一同去云南旅游; 2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往; 3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到 8 月份。 这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本 作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上 下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显 得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。 【一句多译】 我可以建议把旅行推迟到 8 月份早些时候吗? (1)Can I suggest that we put it off until early august? (2)Would you mind if we we put it off until early august? 【参考范文】 Dear Chris, How is everything going? I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now bucause my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned. I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early august? I wish you could understand. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Joe 2017 全国高考英语满分作文(云南卷) 作文题目： 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公 园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介 绍讨论情况。 60%的同学认为: 1.不应该收门票 2.公园是公众休闲的地方 3.如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 40%的同学认为: 1.应收 门票，但票价不要太高 2.支付园林工人工资 3.购新花木 注意： 1.信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数：100 左右。 3.参考词汇：门票---entrance f ee 范文： Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think t hat an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either a t home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the par k and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees. With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor? Yours truly, Li Hua