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一、审题,定要点
首先,要明确文章的体裁,是议论文、记叙文、说明文,还是应用文。再决定使用的人称和时态。例如,日记用过去时;说明文、议论文用一般现在时。2010年湖北卷的短文写作是读文写文的新文体,要求举一例子来说明微笑的功能,那么这个例子是自己经历过的,所以用过去时。再如2009年湖北卷要求回一封电子邮件说明两个成语的用法,"'无所不为'应使用'无所事事'"应使用一般现在时。而2008年湖北卷,买了一部手机,由于质量问题要求更换,主要用一般过去时,在表达自己的要点时则应穿插一般现在时:Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
二、加强句与句之间的衔接词,掌握基本体裁结构以及段落的常用语句
表示平行、对等或选择关系:and,both ... and,as well as,nEither ... nor,either ... or,not only ... but also
表示转折关系:but,yet,however,nevertheless,in spite of,although,otherwise,while
表示对比关系:on the contrary,instead of,on the other hand,just like,unlike,in contrast
表示因果关系:so,for,therefore,as a result,because,owing to,due to,thanks to,on account of,because of
表示递进、强调:furthermore,what's more,in addition,moreover,worse still, above all, certainly important of all,to make matters worse
表示解释说明关系:namely,actually,such as,for example,for instance,that is to say,in other words, and so on,to tell you the truth,according to this
表示结论:in short,in brief,in a word,in general,as you know,as far as I know,on the whole
三、增加文章亮点
除了使用连接词使得行文结构分明,文意贯通,而且还要尽可能采用较高级词汇和短语。例如:
(1)I think/believe ... (一般)
In my opinion/view,personally speaking,as far as I know, as far as I'm concerned(较好)
(2)There are three methods. (一般)
There are three solutions/approaches to this problem. (较好)
(3)New China was founded in 1949. (一般)
1949 saw the founding of new China. (较好)
另外还要会用从句,恰当地运用倒装句、强调句和非谓语动词是提高写作档次最高效的办法。例如:
(1)Yao Ming is a great Chinese basketball player,he is helping the Houston Rockets in the NBA and he has a great skill. (简单句)
Yao Ming, who is a great Chinese basketball player and has a great skill,is helping the Houston Rockets in the NBA. (定语从句)
(2)After he had finished his homework, he went out to have a rest. (状语从句)
Having finished his homework,he went out to have a rest. (分词作状语)
(3)I picked up the book in the shop at the corner.
It was in the shop at the corner that I picked up the book. (强调句型)
(4)When he stayed indoors, the door was closed.
He stayed indoors with the doors closed. (with 的复合结构)
(5)Only then did they realize hey had made a serious mistake. (倒装句)
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